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-Many years ago-




A-AH! A-Al!!! you shrieked.
___y/n_____!!!! What happened dude?
T-There's a s-spider on o-our tree.... You squeaked.
Oh, haha! No problem ___y/n_____!!! The hero will save you!

Alfred found the nearest leaf. And picked up the spider. Making sure to bring the leaf near your face to scare you in the process. Then set it on the ground nice and far away.

Haha ___y/n___!!! I didn't realized how afraid you were of spiders! Al taunted, making hand motions like a spider in front of you.
"H-Hey... It's not funny! They're so not awesome! They have eight l-legs and creepy eyes. And they hang everywhere!" you pouted.
Okay! Okay! Sorry ___y/n___, but since the hero saved you... Don't I get a reward?
A reward? Like what? Some of my old Halloween candy?
N-No.... Like a k-kiss! Alfred grinned then puckered up.
You giggled and kissed your friend Al on the forehead.

And since then.... He's been determined to capture your lips.

---------------------Present day-----------------------------------------

Alfred's P.O.V


That dream again! Alfred sat up in his bed.
You were always so stubborn. No matter what Alfred did. You would always refuse to kiss him! Was it that you didn't like him? Did he have some gross pimple on his lips? What was wrong with him! You'd kiss your puppy... Gilbird... Even the neighbors little boys that are in kindergarten. Gosh Al wish he could switch places with them sometimes.

Ugh.. Girls are so weird.. Al facepalmed.

But now, the time had come. He was going to get you to kiss him. Or... Kiss you. And he knew just what to do. It'd been 12 years since that day. And Halloween was just around the corner.

Alfred stood up from his bed. And somehow managed to drag himself to his laptop to finish the details on his plan.

Your P.O.V


You slowly opened your eyes and yawned. It'd been a horrible past week for you. Everyone now knew of your fear of spiders. And in high school, with all the jerks, whenever anyone had a chance. They'd pull out a fake spider, hide plastic spider rings in your lunch, or have a drop down tarantula above your homeroom doorway. You probably wouldn't have survived the last week if it weren't for your "hero" Al. Whenever someone pulled a prank on you. He'd easily take down the tarantula so that you could safely enter your class. Or he'd check your lunch for you and throw away any "unwanted items." Though it'd be a whole lot better if he didn't always ask for a "show of appreciation." Its not that you didn't want to... Its just, you would always get so distraught from the sight of those vial creatures. That you'd just tense up.

You got out of bed and grabbed your laptop. Sitting back down and logging onto Skype. Deciding to check up on Al.

"Good morning Alfie!"
"Sup ___y/n___"
"What's up bro! :D"
"Oh just, stuff.."
"What kind of stuff?"
"I gtg ___y/n___"
"What? AL? AL!?"

You'd wondered what that was all about. But knowing Al, he probably left a hot pocket in the microwave for too long! But instead of waiting to see what's up. You changed into, [f/c] sweatshirt, denim shorts and [f/c] hi-top sneakers, deciding to keep your pajama shirt under.
You walked across the street. And through Al's backyard to find his window closed. So you went back out to the front door and knocked.

Alfred's P.O.V


I almost had the finishing touches done when I heard ___y/n___ and mines' secret knock. I knew she'd want to come in so I had to work fast to clean up the evidence of my plan. I knew __y/n___ could be a impatient girl. So I shouted out "THE HERO IS ON THE WAY" to by myself more time. I have to get this stuff out the way!
And with that, Al began shoving hundreds of FAKE SPIDERS? Into the nearest closet.

Your P.O.V


Just when I thought Al was taking way to long. He shouted his signature, "THE HERO IS ON THEY WAY" which means he's obviously rushing with something. Oh gosh, what if he has a girl in there... GAHHH. GET OUT BAD THOUGHTS!
After another 2 and a half minutes, Al finally opened up.
"There you are Alfie!" You grinned, but soon turned into a flustered mess when you realize your childhood friend had no shirt on!
You quickly covered your eyes and turned around. Hoping Al didn't see you in such a tomato like appearance.
"U-Uh... I'm guessing you fell back asleep Al?" you mumbled.
It's not like you hadn't seen Al shirtless before. Its just.... You'd never noticed how toned he was. Even with all the McDonalds he eats.

Alfred's P.O.V


W-Was that... Blushing? Ol' stubborn ___y/n____ is blushing over me? Haha I knew she couldn't resist the hero. But no time for that now. I need to distract her... QUICK!
And of course that's when Matt stumbled down with that bear of his. Kumajaja was it? Something like that. Anyway, that's when I had an idea..
I rested a hand on _______'s shoulder. And said...
"You know ___y/n___ if you can't handle me. Then you could look into my eyes instead..

Your P.O.V


And that's when he said it... I turned around and looked him dead in the eye.
"I-I W-WAS LOOKING AT YOU I-IN THE EYE E-EARLIER TOO!!!"

Alfred's P.O.V


See, I don't understand why she's so stubborn! I'm not making fun of her... I was just... GR!

Author's P.O.V


After ___y/n___ relaxed, Al told her that Matt wanted to spend the day with her. The Canadian looked at the two confused until he noticed his brother mouthing words to him.
"Keep her busy! Just for today!"
With that being said. The younger brother ran upstairs to get himself decent and somehow got ___y/n___ to agree and together they left off.

Alfred's P.O.V


Phew. Now that she's taken care of... Time to finish the final touches.
Chappy 1! Because I didn't feel like cramming it into a one-shot or whatever. xD

I hope you guys like!

Picture- Not mine
Alfred (America) - Hidekaz Himaruya
You - You
Me - Me xD
Story - Mine
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RoxyDanaSchlyer1218 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Artist
ooooh i wonder what Mattie is gonna do........DAMIT BAD THOUGHTS LEAVE ALREADY GEEZ! lovely story though keep it going for us fangirls plz thanks
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anoynomous-writer Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Part 2! Please man!
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Part 2 please!
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lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bunny Girl Emoji-53 (Notice me please) [V3] whens the next one meow Bunny Girl Emoji-53 (Notice me please) [V3] lol and yes im a meowing bunny Bunny Girl Emoji-48 (Excited) [V3]  cant what to read the next one Bunny Girl Emoji-55 (Wink) [V3] Bunny Girl Emoji-51 (Yay yay) [V3] 
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RoxyDanaSchlyer1218 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Artist
im a Russia Female Human Flying Mint Bunny...nice to see another bunny around here :D
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lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Edited Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD  awesome yay more bunnys ^-^
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RoxyDanaSchlyer1218 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Artist
YAY! ^3^
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TheLoverofAnimeVe Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Hurry with part two!~ How am I supposed to survive without knowing what his plaaaaan iiiiisss? T.T
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lol2468lol Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love it~!
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MORE!!!
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2pvs1p Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Part 2!
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student General Artist
More!
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EarthLuv Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Part two is missing...IT HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED!!
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qweruiopqweruiop Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
more please!
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HostclubOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wheres Part Two X3
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yasminapopovici Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am scared of spiders,and right now,two big barrel fat-ass spiders give me weird looks.:(
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TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I'm scared of spiders, too.
Though every adult is saying that they are more scared of me than I'm scared of them, but that's so not true!! -_-
Keep writing!
And please finish this story, I really want to know Al's plan. ._.
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
e_________e :iconwatching-youplz: I'm watching you Al... e____O
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AnalieseEdelstein Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
EEEEPPPPP!!!! SPIDERS!!!! *climbs up onto a chair*
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FunkiestOhio66 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
I'm not scared of spiders but I don't like them... Awesome story so far!
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Myu-Tan Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
What is he planning!?!


I'm scared of spiders! > o <

Can't wait to see the next one. :3
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The-Kindest-Demon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lol, its weird that i saw this, i have like 60, 50? idk somwhere around there pet spiders xDD
their walking on me right now, but anyways, this story is awesome~!!!
i hope theres chapter 2!! and alfred is just adorable!
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NeoSailorCrystal Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So cute!!! I love it! I hope to see more of your work soon (including the conclusion to this story)!
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Muwahahaha! Lol, just kidding! I cannot wait to see where this goes!
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KenkoSpellCaster Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay, I though i was the only one to keep my pjs under my regular clothes XD

Something tells me this plan isn't going to work at all. if it was me and i saw all those spiders i would just run out into the street and into my own house now matter how far the run.
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
You'll see what happens....

All I can say is, its going to work xD
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AokiBro Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CONTINUE, I WANT TO SPEND TIME WITH MATTIE, TOO.
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Oh I'm glad you said that. Because I didn't know if I should add in what the reader did with Mattie while Al was planning stuff. xD

Thank you for the comment! :D
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sakurita123cami Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student
Good good... I HATE SPIDERS THEY ARE SO EVIL AND TOTALLY UNAWESOME! D:<

LOL... Next one soon? XD
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
ASDFGHJKL AGREE.

And yeah, I'll have the next part up soon! x)
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sakurita123cami Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student
YAY! x3
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killersuzie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
o.o b-but i like spiders
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
S-Sorry then xD

Try imagining a world where you're terrified of them maybe?
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killersuzie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Im not scared of them
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Do they creep you out in ANY way? :ooo
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killersuzie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Oh that's too bad.

Well I hope you'll still continue the story!
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killersuzie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I will
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
I like spiders but they creep me out. BTW I love the story so far! MORE!MORE!
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
:D Thank you! I'll probably have the next chapter out today or sometimes in the next few days x)
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Ok great!
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
*sometime
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Allthecoolnamesrgone Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Spiders are my number 1 fear too. Can't wait for more!! ^_^
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BTT-DA-ACCT Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Same here .-.

I'm glad you like!
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